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The Rocking-Horse Winner -by D. H. Lawrence http://www.enotes.com/rocking-horse-winner/copyright

The Rocking-Horse Winner: Introduction
The Rocking-Horse Winner" first published in 1926 in Harper's Bazaar magazine. Some critics have argued that the characters in the story are modeled after Lady Asquith (Lawrence´s friend) and her autistic son. Lawrence's works are known for their explorations of human nature through frank discussions of sex, psychology and religion. Lawrence's later short stories, such as "The Rocking-Horse Winner," display a movement toward tabulation and satire as opposed to his earlier short fiction, which reflected more the traditional nineteenth-century English short story—anecdotal, or tales of adventure. "The Rocking-Horse Winner" is a sardonic tale employing devices of the fairy tale and a mockingly detached tone to moralize on the value of love and the dangers of money. In "The Rocking-Horse Winner" and other later stories, Lawrence moved beyond the strictures of realism and encompassed a broader range of styles and subjects than in his earlier work. Critics view "The Rocking-Horse Winner" as an example of Lawrence's most accomplished writing. Lawrence is considered a modernist, a member of a literary school opposed to the literary conventions of nineteenth-century morality, taste, and tradition. Evident in "The Rocking-Horse Winner" is Lawrence's distain for conspicuous consumption, crass materialism, and an emotionally distant style of parenting popularly thought to exist in England during the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries. Thus, the story is considered by many to be an example of modernist prose.

 D. H. Lawrence Biography - David Herbert Lawrence was born September 11, 1885. His father was Arthur John Lawrence, an illiterate coal miner in the Nottinghamshire area of England; his mother was Lydia Beardsall Lawrence, a teacher. The fact that his mother had more education than his father caused friction in the Lawrence household. From boyhood, Lawrence was very close to his mother and, following his mother's encouragement, he studied at Nottingham University College, where he began writing short stories. In 1908, he moved to Croyden, just south of London, and began teaching. He never returned to his childhood home.
He began to publish poetry and, because he had developed tuberculosis, decided to quit teaching and write full time in 1911. That same year he published his first novel, The White Peacock, which was well received by critics. When he was twenty-seven years old, Lawrence eloped to Germany with Frieda von Richthofen Weekly, the wife of one of his college professors, and they were married in 1914. He and Frieda returned to England just before the beginning of World War I, but they endured continual harassment from the English government due to Lawrence's objections to the war and Frieda's German ancestry.
His next novel, The Rainbow, was judged obscene and was banned in England; many of his subsequent works incited similar controversy. This experience left Lawrence bitter and more convinced than ever that the forces of modern civilization were oppressive and unhealthy. After the war, the Lawrences lived an itinerant life in Germany, Austria, Italy, Sicily, England, France, Australia, and Mexico, before settling in Taos, New Mexico. All this travelling provided the settings for many of the stories and novels that Lawrence wrote in the 1920s and also inspired four books of travel sketches. In 1930, Lawrence entered a hospital in France in an attempt to cure the tuberculosis that had plagued him most of his life, but he died that same year. Although he was originally buried in Vence, France, his remains were later moved to Taos, New Mexico, and buried at Kiowa Ranch.
Although Lawrence's most famous work is his novel Lady Chatterley's Lover, many critics agree that his short stories, including "The Rocking-Horse Winner" (1926) are better than his novels. His thematic focus on relationships between men and women, the destruction of relationships by the desire for wealth, and his explorations of psychological motivation in human behavior earned him an international reputation as an important twentieth-century author.
The Rocking-Horse Winner: Summary  the story of a boy's gift for picking the winners in horse races. An omniscient narrator relates the tale of a boy whose family is always short of money. His mother is incapable of showing love and is obsessed with the status that material wealth can provide. Her son is acutely aware of his mother's desire for money, and he is motivated to take action. He wants to help her, but he also wants to silence the voice that haunts him, the voice of the house itself whispering, "There must be more money! There must be more money!" Paul questions his mother about the family's circumstances. When he asks her why they do not have a car and why they are the "poor members of the family," she responds "it's because your father has no luck." Dissatisfied with her answer, the boy presses her for an explanation of what makes one person lucky and another unlucky. Finally, he declares that he knows himself to be lucky because God told him so. With the help of Basset the gardener and his mother's brother Oscar, Paul sets out to prove his brazen assertion true by picking the winners in horse races. While riding on his rocking horse, Paul envisions the winners. Paul proves to be unnaturally talented at divining the winners of the races, and before too long he has saved a considerable sum of money. When his uncle asks him what he plans to do with the money, he reveals that he wants to give it to his mother. He hopes that his contribution will bring her luck and make the house stop whispering. Because Paul wants to keep his success at betting a secret, Paul arranges through his uncle to give his mother an anonymous gift of a thousand pounds each year for five years. His gift does not have the intended effect, however. Instead of being delighted when she opens the envelope on her birthday, Paul's mother is indifferent, "her voice cold and absent." Desperate to please her, the boy agrees to let his mother have the whole five thousand at once. Instead of quieting the voices in the house, Paul's generous gift causes the voices to go "mad, like a chorus of frogs on a spring evening." Although his mother finally can afford some of the fine things she has been craving, like fresh flowers and private school for Paul, the voices just "trilled and screamed in a sort of ecstasy." The more Paul gives, the more his mother and the voices in the house demand. Though his uncle tries to calm him, Paul becomes obsessed with picking the winner of the upcoming Derby, "his blue eyes blazing with a sort of madness" as he rides his rocking horse. The mother feels uncharacteristically sympathetic toward her son and urges him to join the family at seaside, but Paul insists on staying until after the Derby. The reason that Paul needs to stay in the house until the Derby is that his "secret of secrets" is his childhood rocking horse. The secret that he has never revealed to Basset or Uncle Oscar is that he is able to ride the rocking horse, which he has long since outgrown, until the wooden horse reveals to him the name of the winner in the next race. With so much riding on the Derby and the house whispering more insistently than ever, Paul knows he must be prepared for the ride of his young life. In fact, Paul is so anxious that even his mother feels the tension and suffers "sudden strange seizures of anxiety about him." Nevertheless, she decides to attend a big party two nights before the Derby, leaving Paul at home. Throughout the evening the mother is distracted by worry about her son's well-being. When she and her husband come home around one o'clock, she rushes immediately to Paul's room. Standing outside his door, the mother is frozen in her tracks by a "strange, heavy, and yet not loud noise" coming from inside the room. When she finally gathers the courage to enter the room she sees her son "in his green pajamas, madly urging on the rocking-horse." She has arrived just in time to here him cry out "'It's Malabar!' … in a powerful, strange voice." Then, "his eyes blazed at her for one strange and senseless second," and he crashes to the floor unconscious. Neither the mother nor the father understand the significance of the word, but Uncle Oscar knows that it is one of the horses racing in the Derby. Oscar, "in spite of himself," places a bet on Malabar and passes on the tip to Basset. By the third day, the day of the Derby, the boy has still not regained consciousness and his condition appears to be worsening. Desperate for anything that might help her son, the mother allows Basset a short visit with Paul. Paul does regain consciousness, but just long enough to learn that Malabar had been the winner and that he has made over eighty thousand pounds for his mother. His mother still does not acknowledge that her son had been lucky or that she truly loves him. At the moment of Paul's death, Oscar chides his sister: "My God, Hester, you're eighty-odd thousand pounds to the good, and a poor devil of a son to the bad."
The Rocking-Horse Winner: Characters
Bassett -  the family gardener who helps Paul place bets on horses. He used to work around horses and racing and he talks about racing all the time, so it seems reasonable that Paul would seek his advice. He takes the boy seriously and follows all the boy's instructions in placing the bets. He also keeps Paul's money safely hidden away, at least until Uncle Oscar gets involved. He is the only adult who treats Paul with a serious respect. It is Bassett's seriousness that convinces Uncle Oscar that Paul's gift for picking winners is real. He is trustworthy and kind, but is also a servant, so once Uncle Oscar takes over, he respectfully withdraws from the action.
Oscar Cresswell - Paul's uncle and Hester's brother. He is in a better financial position than Hester, since he owns his own car and a place in Hampshire. This is because he inherited the entire family fortune, leaving Hester to depend on her husband for support. It is Uncle Oscar who stumbles upon Paul's secret of earning money through gambling, but he does not at first believe in Paul's gift. He thinks that Paul is not serious and treats the boy as if he were merely playing a game. After Oscar realizes that Paul's tips are dependable, he encourages the gambling. Oscar arranges for a lawyer to funnel money to Hester. He also bets his own money, using Paul's tips for his own profit. Although Uncle Oscar seems harmless at first, the reader becomes aware that he is using Paul for his own benefit. He makes no effort to teach Paul about being careful with money or the dangers of gambling. Oscar does nothing to help Hester and her family, neither by giving money nor by helping Hester budget what money she does have. Because Oscar only uses Paul for his own financial gain, he is revealed to be shallow and selfish.
Hester - Paul's mother, who is incapable of loving others. She is not only obsessed with money, but she is also irresponsible with the money she does get. When Paul arranges through his attorney to give her a thousand pounds a month from his winnings, she immediately begs the attorney for the entire amount. However, instead of paying her debts, she spends the money on new things for the house. This results in an even greater need for more money. She also does not express any thanks for this sudden windfall, depriving Paul of the joy of providing the much-needed income for his family. Although at the end of the story Hester becomes increasingly concerned about Paul's deteriorating health, she still does not love him, even when he dies. At the beginning of the story, it is stated that "at the center of her heart was a hard little place that could not feel love, no, not for anybody." This image is repeated at the end of the story, when Hester sits by her son's bedside "feeling her heart had gone, turned actually into a stone." Before he dies Paul asks, "Mother, did I ever tell you? I'm lucky." She responds, "No, you never did." However, the reader remembers that Paul did, indeed, tell her that he was lucky earlier in the story. Since she pays little attention to him, she does not remember this. When Hester finally receives the financial fortune she has always wanted but loses her son in the process, the reader realizes that Hester will probably not feel the loss of her son and will probably waste all that money in record time. All of these details show Hester to be cold, unfeeling, wasteful, and shallow.
Paul -the young boy in the story who tries desperately to find a way to have "luck," meaning money, for his mother. He begins to ride his rocking horse furiously, even though he has outgrown it, because when he does so, he somehow is given the name of the horse that will win the next race. He makes an astounding amount of money this way with the help of the gardener Bassett (who places his bets for him), and later with the help also of his Uncle Oscar. For the final big race, the Derby, he rides himself into a feverish delirium, but he is sure of the winner. His uncle places a large bet for him. Just as his uncle arrives to tell him of the fortune he has made, he dies from the fever. Paul dies for the sake of making money for the family, particularly his mother, even though her "heart was a stone." Paul seems completely unaware that he has overtaken responsibilities that are rightly his parents'. He seems only concerned with relieving the anxiety he perceives in the house caused by a lack of money. He tries to understand why there is not enough money by asking his mother, but she only says that his father "has no luck." He directly associates luck with money, so the gambling seems like a natural solution to the problem. He is so innocent in his enthusiasm for the game he begins playing with Bassett that even when his uncle discovers that he has been gambling, he does not stop Paul from gambling further. Even though Paul is still a child, all of the adults, Bassett, Uncle Oscar, and Paul's mother, seem to treat him like an adult. No one anticipates that Paul will pay a huge price for playing this game. No one even questions Paul's ability to pick the winners of the horse races, or wonders how in the world Paul is able to pick winners so accurately. Throughout the story Paul remains innocent, as well as desperate, to help his mother, who seems oblivious to Paul's concerns. Although it is clear to the reader that Paul is very intelligent and sensitive, no one in the story seems to notice or appreciate Paul's gifts until it is too late.
The Rocking-Horse Winner: Themes
a young boy, Paul, perceives that there is never enough money in his family, he sets out to find a way to get money through luck. He discovers that if he rides his rocking-horse fast enough, he will somehow "know" the name of the winning horse in the next race. He begins to make money and secretly funnel this money to his mother, but the desire for more money only grows more intense instead of going away. He finally rides his rocking horse so furiously in order to discover the winner of the Derby that he falls into illness and dies, just as the winning horse earns his family an enormous fortune.
Responsibility -The obsession with wealth and material items is pitted against the responsibilities of parenting in "The Rocking-Horse Winner." It is the responsibility of the parents to provide for the children in a family. It is also the responsibility of the parents to spend money wisely and budget carefully, so that the bills are paid and no one goes without food, clothing, or shelter. However, in this story, Lawrence turns this on its ear, making the parents complete failures at financial dealings and their son Paul incredibly gifted at making money, albeit by gambling. The parents in the story drift from one thing to another, never really finding anything they can do to provide for the family. The mother "tried this thing and the other, but could not find anything successful." The father, whose main talents are having expensive tastes and being handsome, "seemed as if he would never be able to do anything worth doing." When Paul gives his mother 5,000 pounds from his winnings, rather than paying off debts and saving for the future, she spends all of it on material things, causing an even more need for more money.
Generosity and Greed The disparity between Paul's generosity and his mother's greed. Paul generously offers all his winnings to the family, in order to relieve the family's dire need for money. He seems to have no needs of his own and is motivated solely by the desire to help his mother. Paul's unselfish generosity is contrasted starkly with the mother's greed and selfishness. When the mother first receives the news from the lawyer that she has "inherited" 5,000 pounds from a long-lost relative which will be paid out to her in yearly increments of 1,000 pounds (a scheme dreamed up by Paul), she does not inform the family of their good fortune. Instead, she goes immediately to the lawyer and asks to receive the entire amount right away. Paul agrees, and the money is spent foolishly on more material things for the house. Instead of relieving the family's need for money, Paul's plan backfires and thus there is a need for even more money. Paul and his mother are complete opposites. Paul, in his childish innocence, gives and gives to the family, without any desire for thanks and without any desire to keep any of the money for himself. He ultimately gives the most precious gift of all: his life. Hester, Paul's mother, has no idea where all this money is coming from and does not seem to care. Hester has become so obsessed with wealth that her heart turns completely to stone; she cannot even feel sad when her son dies.
Oedipus Complex Paul's desire to earn money for the family can be said to be an unconscious desire to take his father's place, a concept that psychoanalyst Sigmund Freud termed the "Oedipus complex." This is a reference to the story from ancient Greece in which Oedipus, who was raised away from his parents, accidently kills his father and marries his mother. Freud suggested that all boys go through a stage where they want to take their father's place, Paul's desire to take care of the family's needs is Oedipal. Since the main way of earning this money—the rocking horse—is also bound up in sexual imagery, it seems clear that Lawrence intentionally characterizes Paul this way.

Style - The opening paragraphs of "The Rocking-Horse Winner" are written in a style similar to that of a fairy tale. Instead of "once upon a time," though, Lawrence begins with "There was a woman who was beautiful, who started with all the advantages, yet she had no luck." This is a conscious attempt on the part of the author to use the traditional oral storytelling technique. This story also combines the supernatural elements of a fable, mainly Paul's ability to "know" the winners just by riding his rocking horse, with the serious themes of an unhappy marriage and an unhealthy desire for wealth at all costs. The story begins with fable-like simplicity but ends with a serious message about wasted lives.
Symbolism The symbolism in this story is very sexually oriented. The rocking horse represents both Paul's desire to make money for his mother and his own sexuality. The rocking horse is his "mount'' which is "forced" onwards in a "furious ride" towards "frenzy." These descriptions are very suggestive of sexual activity. However, this is disturbing because Paul is very young and he is participating in this act for the sake of his mother. The rocking horse can also represent the fact that the overwhelming desire for money is a road that leads to nowhere, since this is a rocking horse that does not actually travel anywhere. Also, the desire for wealth can be said to be extremely unhealthy as well, since it results in Hester's unhappiness and Paul's death.
Historical Context -The Modern Era - Lawrence was writing during the early part of the twentieth century, and he, like most writers of the day, was significantly influenced by World War I. He had read and loved the novels of nineteenth-century writers George Eliot, author of Silas Marner, and Thomas Hardy, author of Tess of the D'Urbervilles, but grew dissatisfied with the predictability of such characters. After the war, many people began to question the old ways of looking at the world. Lawrence joined in the questioning by making his characters less sure of themselves, less bound by the rules of polite society that dominated nineteeth-century fiction.
Lawrence became interested in the psychological motivations for why people do the things they do. Psychology as a science was in its infancy at this time. Sigmund Freud, the "father" of modern psychology, was formulating his theories regarding the unconscious through observing his patients at his practice in Vienna. Lawrence was also convinced that the modern way of life, long hours at cruel jobs for little pay, was dehumanizing. His characters were often failures in relationships who felt aliented in their misery. Furthermore, his writing was frequently embellished with themes about greed, materialism, and degrading work, which were issues of increasing concern to people at the time.
Critical Overview -  Critics consider Lawrence's short stories his most artistically accomplished writing and have attributed much of their success to the constraints of the form, which forced Lawrence to deny himself the elaborations, diversions, and repetitions that are integral aspects of his longer works. Critics view "The Rocking-Horse Winner" in this light, as an example of economical style and structure in Lawrence's short fiction. Lawrence's early short stories were written in a manner similar to that of Robert Louis Stevenson or Rudyard Kipling, whose anecdotes and tales of adventure epitomized the traditional nineteenth-century English short story. His later short stories, such as "The Rocking-Horse Winner," emphasize abstraction and argument. Critics argue that this story is an example of Lawrence moving away from realism and encompassing a broader range of styles and subjects. They view "The Rocking-Horse Winner" as an example of Lawrence's later period, in which his keen insight and sturdy craft are the result of many years of experience.
Many of Lawrence's works were considered controversial, and "The Rocking-Horse Winner" is no exception. The story has generated a large amount of scholarly debate and has been compared to a wide variety of other works, including classic myths, parables, and the writings of Charles Dickens, among others. Some critics focus on the socio-economic, religious, and sexual aspects of the story. Other critics have highlighted the Freudian aspects of the work or have interpreted it in terms of economic theories and spiritual allusions. "The Rocking-Horse Winner" has been criticized for its didactic qualities; that is, some critics feel the story is too focused on teaching a lesson. Though the story continues to stimulate debate, most critics agree that the plot, description, dialogue, and symbolism of the story are presented with great skill.
Essays and Criticism - "The Rocking-Horse Winner" belongs to the group of stories D. H. Lawrence wrote in the last years of his life. During this period, critics have noted, he abandoned the realism that characterizes his mid-career work, and turned toward a style of short story that more closely resembles the fable or folktale. In the words of Janice Hubbard Harris, in The Short Fiction of D. H. Lawrence, "The Rocking-Horse Winner" and other stories of the period, represent the "desire of a fierce and dying man to prophesy, sum up, assess the world he is leaving rather than present or imitate it." The story also presents several themes that held Lawrence's attention throughout his career.
The style and tone of "The Rocking-Horse Winner" reveal immediately that this story comes from the world of fable and legend. The distant, solemn tone of the narrator: "There was a woman who was beautiful," signals us that this is an old story. Quickly it becomes apparent that this is a quest narrative of some sort. The boy hero will try to win the love of the distant queen/mother. The object of the quest is to gain access to "the centre of her heart [that] was a hard place that could not feel love, no, not for anybody." The hero rides off, captures the treasure, and returns home to present the riches to his love. But the opening of the story is also foreboding, because "undercutting this fairy tale, however, is another, which forms a grotesque shadow, a nightmare counter to the wish-fulfillment narrative," in Harris's words. The quest is hopeless, Harris points out, because the mother can never be satisfied and "every success brings a new and greater trial."
Given the stylized characterization and the symbolic landscape that Lawrence creates in "The Rocking-Horse Winner," we can read the meaning of the story on several levels. In the first place, Lawrence seems to be offering a broad satire on rising consumerism in English culture. In particular, this story criticizes those who equate love with money, luck with happiness. The mother with her insatiable desire for material possessions believes that money will make her happy despite the obvious fact that so far it has not. For Lawrence she represents the futility of the new consumer culture in which luck and lucre mean the same thing. Paul, who learns from his mother to associate love with money, represents the desperate search for values in a cash culture. The force of Lawrence's satire is directed at a society that is dominated by a quest for cash, and at those who buy into the deadly equation of love equals money.
This fable about a boy's doomed attempts to satisfy his mother's desires and win her love also provides Lawrence the opportunity to work out one of the themes that dominate his entire body of work, the relationship between mothers and sons. Lawrence's theory, which is the central concern of one of his most famous novels, Sons and Lovers, is that mothers mold their sons into men who are the opposites of their undesirable husbands. Since mothers know that they cannot change their husbands, they throw all their passion into creating desirable sons, whom, of course, they cannot possess. In "The Rocking-Horse Winner," the husband's inadequacy is explicit. The narrator describes him as "one who was always very handsome and expensive in his tastes, [and] seemed as if he never would be able to do anything worth doing." Making her feelings very clear to her young son, the mother "bitterly" characterizes her husband as "very unlucky." When she confides in her son that she is dissatisfied with her husband, the mother sets in motion the boys futile quest to please her, to be the man she wants him/her husband to be. After this, the father is hardly mentioned in the story, let alone seen. The mother's desire to make and possess her son constitutes another dark counter-narrative to the story's wish-fulfillment theme.
Both Paul's desire to win his mother's love as well as her desire to make him into the image of an ideal husband are doomed to futility. This kind of misdirected and frustrated sexuality is a persistent theme in Lawrence's fiction and nonfiction writing, and the fable-like quality of "The Rocking-Horse Winner" gives Lawrence an opportunity to dramatize some of theories about sexuality on a symbolic level. The course of Lawrence's career demonstrates the evolution of his theories on sexuality and gender. By the end of his life, when "The Rocking-Horse Winner" was written, Lawrence's ideas had evolved into his theory of polarity, which is based on the premise that maleness and femaleness are absolute opposites and that men and women cannot have any attributes of the opposite sex. The theory of polarity, which is derived in part from Lawrence's acquaintance with Freudian psychology, asserts that an individual achieves wholeness by balancing his or her energy against another individual's. For Lawrence, this balance is achieved by a flow of energy, like an electric current, which is usually rendered as sexual desire in his fiction.
Critics have noted the connections between Lawrence's published ideas about sexuality, particularly in the essay "Pornography and Obscenity," and in "The Rocking-Horse Winner." In "A Rocking-Horse: The Symbol, the Pattern, the Way to Live," an influential article written in 1958, W. D. Snodgrass analyzed the psychosexual dimensions of the story through the lens of Lawrence's published writings. Snodgrass summarizes Lawrence's thesis as the argument that pornography is "art which contrives to make sex ugly … and so leads the observer away from sexual intercourse and toward masturbation." Paul's rocking horse riding, then, represents masturbation, "the child's imitation of the sex act, for the riding which goes nowhere." Lawrence's point, however, is not that Paul's "secret of secrets" kills him. What is unnatural from Lawrence's point of view is that Paul and his mother are locked into a pattern of mutually frustrated desire. Neither one of them is directing their energy at an appropriate "polarity." Significantly, however, they do not share equal responsibility for their situation. Lawrence, through his narrator, places all the blame on the mother and martyrs the boy in one final self-sacrificing ride.
Source: Elisabeth Piedmont-Marton, for Short Stories for Students, Gale Research, 1997. Piedmont-Morton is the coordinator of the Undergraduate Writing Center at the University of Texas at Austin.

Overview of "The Rocking-Horse Winner" Lawrence, Lady Cynthia Asquith, and "The Rocking-Horse Winner"
D. H. Lawrence's habit of making identifiable use of his friends and acquaintances in his novels and short stories has been well documented, as has his lack of concern for the possible distress such portraits might cause. Lady Ottoline Morrell and Philip Heseltine were outraged by their appearance in Women in Love as Hermione and Halliday, and although Lawrence tried to assure his friend Mark Gertler that he was not the model for the rat-like Loerke in the same novel, it is generally agreed that he was. John Middleton Murry, despite his admiration for Lawrence, was never able to forgive him for the group of short stones in which Murry is made to look ridiculous, and Compton Mackenzie was annoyed at finding himself the protagonist in "The Man Who Loved Islands." "England, My England," with its satiric portraits of Percy Lucas and the Meynell family, was published shortly before Lucas' death in France, and has been called Lawrence's "cruelest story à clef." To these and other stories can be added another based upon a real-life situation, "The Rocking-Horse Winner." This story was first published in the fall of 1926 in a collection called The Ghost Book assembled by Lawrence's longtime friend, Lady Cynthia Asquith. As I hope to show, the story was probably suggested by the tragic illness of Lady Cynthia's oldest son John and by the Asquith marriage itself. Although it is unlikely that Lady Cynthia recognized herself in the character Hester, or connected her son's tragedy—at its height almost ten years before the story was written—with Paul, biographical materials demonstrate that Lawrence found in the Asquith household the ingredients for his story on destructive materialism.
That Lawrence used these materials as he did is surprising because it is generally agreed that Lady Cynthia occupied a rather special place in his life. His biographer, Harry T. Moore, remarks that "Lawrence felt a respectful affection, if not love for her," and her Diaries show that she held the novelist in considerable esteem. In her memoir, written many years after Lawrence's death, she speaks very warmly of him, stressing his electric aliveness and gentleness. In other stories in which she is the model for the heroine, she is treated with tact and affection. An early sketch, "The Thimble," was intended as a "word-picture" of her, and was sent to her for her criticism. She was uneasy about its probable contents; having read The Rainbow in manuscript, she feared a "minute 'belly' analysis" of herself. But she was pleased by the story and found it "extremely well-written.… I think some of his character hints are damnably good." Two later stories, The Ladybird and "Glad Ghosts," are also considered to contain heroines modeled on Lady Cynthia, both attractive figures. Not only is Lady Cynthia pleasantly presented, but most stories in which she was the model for the heroine do not end unhappily. In "The Thimble" the couple is re-born, and becomes capable of growing into full maturity
and love as a result. In The Ladybird, Lady Daphne, unfulfilled by her adoring husband, reaches unity of being through her love affair with Count Dionys. In "Glad Ghosts" Carlotta's husband, stimulated by the advice of a Lawrence-like house guest, suddenly gains insight into the importance of the body. His marriage is revitalized, his bad luck overcome, and Carlotta gives birth to a charming blond boy "like a little crocus" nine months later. (Lawrence had nicknamed Lady Cynthia's son "Jonquil.") Rather ambiguously, the guest is visited at night by a feminine ghost, and he is uncertain in the morning whether it was a ghost or a living woman. It has been suggested that Lawrence decided against sending this story to Lady Cynthia because of the implications of its conclusion, and after considering it, submitted "The Rocking-Horse Winner" instead.
Biographical materials will show the striking similarities between the Asquith family and the family in the story. Lady Cynthia, like Carlotta and Hester, was visited by very bad luck indeed in her firstborn son. In his infancy he seemed normal, and his charm and sweet temper delighted everyone. Lawrence in letters written in 1913 inquired about "the fat and smiling John,'' and asked,"How is the jonquil with the golden smile." But by the time the boy was four years old, it had become obvious that something was seriously wrong with him. The editor of the Diaries labels his condition autism, a disorder still not well understood. And the Lawrences' close association with the Asquiths began just as the mother's fears were beginning to crystalize.
The Lawrences visited Lady Cynthia in Brighton in May 1915, and John had tea with them. She reports in her diary that "the Lawrences were riveted by the freakishness of John, about whom they showed extraordinary interest and sympathy … he was in a wild, monkey mood—very challenging, just doing things for the sake of being told not to—impishly defiant and still his peculiar, indescribable detachment." The next day Lawrence and Lady Cynthia strolled to the cliffs overlooking Brighton and discussed John's condition for several hours.
The mother, who elsewhere expresses her admiration for Lawrence's deep insight into character, received a long and depressing analysis. She was upset to learn that her friend believed she was responsible for her son's condition, that the boy was reacting to her scepticism and cynicism, to her lack of positive belief that made her appear, on the surface, charmingly tolerant and kind. Later he told her that her spirit was "hard and stoical," a judgment which she rejected, but which is parallel to Hester who "knew that at the center of her heart was a hard little place that could not feel love.…"
A few days later Lawrence wrote a long letter about John in which he argued that she and her husband lacked a living belief in anything, that the world in which she lived had stunted her soul, and she had not resisted. "Your own soul knew … that it was itself bound in like a tree that grows under a low roof and can never break through, and which must be deformed, unfulfilled. Herbert Asquith must have known the same thing, in his soul." John had been born from the womb and loins of unbelief, distorted from his conception: "the soul of John acts from your soul, even from the start: because he knows that you are Unbelief, and he reacts from your affirmation of belief always with hostility." He cautions her against trying to force her son's love: "That you fight is only a sign that you are wanting in yourself. The child knows that. Your own soul is deficient, so it fights for the love of the child."
A recent article on "The Rocking-Horse Winner" reaches conclusions on the story itself that are very similar to Lawrence's analysis. Commenting on the wildness of Paul's obsession, Charles Koban says, "It is as if an alien spirit inhabited and drove him … and the spirit is of course the spirit of the mother, the spirit of greed." It is Paul's "mystical openness to her that leaves him vulnerable to the terrible forces she unleashes in her own household." It must be made clear that there is little to suggest that Lady Cynthia or her husband were as obsessed with money and material things as the couple in the story. But from Lawrence's perspective, the Asquiths could not avoid obsessive concern for possessions, given their chosen style of life. Lady Cynthia describes Lawrence strolling about their living room after tea, and suddenly noticing a small Louis XV table. After he stared at it for a moment,"'Come away!' he shrilled out, looking at me as if I stood in immediate deadly peril. 'Come away. Free yourself at once, or before you know where you are, your furniture will be on top instead of under you.' This admonition gave me a nightmare in which I was trampled to death by the legs of my own tables and chairs." A harmless antique table became an instant symbol of the money-lie. Despite Lawrence's fondness for this couple, the link between possessions and the failure of human relationships seems clearly established.
Another letter concerned with Herbert Asquith also prefigures the story, as Lawrence tries to persuade Lady Cynthia not to push her husband into the money-making trap. The Asquiths were not rich, and lack of money was a constant concern. That Lawrence was well aware of this is shown in "The Thimble" where the heroine, left alone when her husband goes to war, cannot maintain the family town house, and takes a small flat which she furnishes with second-hand furniture bought from friends. Lady Cynthia herself spent the war years "cuckooing," that is, living with friends and family to avoid the expense of her own establishment. She worked for some years as a secretary for Sir James Barrie, wrote and published books, and like Hester, once received a summons for debt, a "wretched fourteen-shillings bill." Like the couple in the story, the Asquiths were poor relations compared to the social set to which they belonged by birth. Lawrence, who was tortured by the money-hunger he saw everywhere, urged his friend to realize the connection between money-lust and war: It doesn't matter whether you need money or not. You do need it. But the fact that you would ask him to work, put his soul into getting it, makes him love better war and pure destruction. The thing is painfully irrational. How can a man be so developed to be able to devote himself to making money, and at the same time keep himself in utter antagonism to the whole system of money.…
The defeated, inarticulate husband in "The Rocking-Horse Winner," who goes "into town to some office," is foreshadowed here and in other letters. In one written in 1915, when the Lawrences were planning to leave England, he urged Lady Cynthia to consider leaving also. It was her duty, he felt, to remove her children from "this slow flux of destruction," and to seek a truer existence: "Your husband should have left this decomposing life. There was nowhere to go. Perhaps now he is beaten. Perhaps now the true living is defeated in him. But it is not defeated in you.… So don't give John to this decline and fall. Give him to the future.…"
The Lawrences did not leave England, however, until 1919, and during these years Lady Cynthia records her growing distress at her son's condition. She speaks of his "eerie Puck faces," of his sitting "silent and absorbed in his own thoughts" at a lively family tea party, and of the "strange completeness about him as he is.…" After a dedicated governess managed to teach him to read and write, the mother comments sadly that his performance "gives you the impression of a tour de force like a performing animal." Her growing inability to believe that the boy would ever be normal was becoming strong just as the Lawrences again entered her orbit.
In April 1917 Lawrence visited her, and again insisted that the boy's condition was spiritual, not psychological. His mother had submitted to an unreal existence,"the result being that John is quite off the plane I have violated myself in order to remain on." Almost a year later, Lawrence again discussed John, still certain that he could be helped by "proper psychic influence," and offered to take him for a time to see if association with him and Frieda would help.
And finally Lady Cynthia lost her capacity to love her son, although she struggled not to do so. In a diary entry two days after the Lawrences had come to tea, she speaks of "the John tragedy," which blackened her life for her. It was a nightmare for her to be in the same room with him, and she was violently reproached by his governess for her apparent callousness. Her growing horror of the boy increased, no doubt because his affliction grew steadily more disturbing as he grew older, and in her diary she speaks of a visit to him as "an ordeal behind me." Since the Lawrences were seeing Lady Cynthia during this time period, it is quite likely that he at least was aware of the mother who could not love her son, and of the strong guilt feelings she experienced in consequence.
It is to be regretted that the editor of the Diaries felt it necessary to remove much of the material concerning John, since some of the omitted passages might have provided additional links with the story. But the descriptions of him that remain suggest Paul's behavior in the story: his wildness, his self-absorption, his uncanny faces, his non-human quality, and the sense of his isolation from other members of the household. And it is a matter of common knowledge that a behavior trait among children afflicted with autism is a forward-backward rocking motion of their bodies. It is likely that John would have had a rocking horse, and that he would have used it long after he outgrew it, given his condition. But about these possible, even probable, clues we can only speculate.
A small but significant hint in the story itself suggests that Lawrence had the Asquiths in mind, particularly since the phrasing seems to be a minor slip of the pen. Hester "was at a big party in town, when one of her rushes of anxiety about her boy, her first-born, gripped her heart until she could hardly speak." Not only does the sudden rush of concern describe what Lady Cynthia unquestionably must have experienced on many occasions, but the stipulation "first-born" is interesting. Earlier in the story we are told that Paul has an elder sister. Lawrence seems to have deliberately rearranged the ages and sexes of the children—Lady Cynthia had in fact three children, all boys—but unconsciously returned, as he wrote of the mother's anguish, to the original model for his character.
It would seem that in the Asquiths and in their eldest son Lawrence found ample background material for his story. Lady Cynthia was personally a charming and lovable woman, quite unlike the cold and selfish Hester. And yet Lawrence believed that basic deficiencies in her character had worked against her son's health and happiness. Her marriage had begun as a love match, opposed by her father because neither family could provide an adequate income for the couple. But Lawrence implied his belief that her relationship with her husband could not be satisfactory both in his direct comments in his letters and in the fact that he arranges a better marital relationship, a rebirth, for the heroines in three of his Asquith-inspired stories. The Asquiths' social position, well-connected but comparatively poor, parallels the one described in "The Rocking-Horse Winner." And concerning what was apparently his last visit to her in October 1925, a visit during which she probably asked him to write something for her anthology, he reported laconically to a friend, "Went to Cynthia Asquith's—more sense of failure." It was this sense of failure in her life, as well as in the lives of other friends and acquaintances whom Lawrence visited during his brief stay in England, that produced the bitterness and discouragement of "The Rocking-Horse Winner."
Source: Rosemary Reeves Davies, "Lawrence, Lady Cynthia Asquith, and 'The Rocking-Horse Winner,'" in Studies in Short Fiction, Vol. 20, No. 2-3, Spring-Summer, 1983, pp 121-6.

"The Rocking-Horse Winner": A Modern Myth
A recent critical exchange has re-focused attention on the controversial "Rocking-Horse Winner" by D. H. Lawrence. Except for that of W. R. Martin, the general critical evaluation of the story has been unfavorable, and for the specific reason that critics have failed to perceive the story's essentially mythical quality. The story does precisely what Burroughs and other Lawrence critics (Leavis, Hough, Gordon, and Tate) feel that it fails to do: it presents life. Because of its mythical nature, Burroughs' criticism that the story "is limited by application of Lawrence's hackneyed didacticism to a pathetic plot of fantasy" is not relevant. It is a story of meaning, not morality, and the meaning depends precisely upon the organic relationship between the fantastic and the real.
"The Rocking-Horse Winner" dramatizes modern man's unsuccessful attempt to act out and emerge from his oedipal conflict with the woman-mother. Lawrence states here the same theme as that of the earlier Sons and Lovers. Here the boy Paul, whose name is also the same as that of the central character in Sons and Lovers, takes upon himself the intolerable burden of attempting to solve the mother's "problem," which is demonstrated in the unspoken overtones of the lack of money in the household. The mother attributes this to her lack of "luck"; therefore Paul summons all his energies in order to obtain this luck for his mother. His private incantations assume the form of frenzied riding of his hobbyhorse, which, as Paul points out to his Uncle Oscar, has no name. The fact that when the boy successfully divines in advance the winners of real horse races, and by doing so wins a great deal of "lucky" money which fails to make his mother happy, demonstrates that money is not the mother's central need. The money does not bring her "luck." The growing anguish and tormented frustration that Paul experiences come to a climax at the end of the story with his death as a result of riding his hobbyhorse too long and too hard in the dark of his room at night. He literally sacrifices himself, and the agent of his death is his hobbyhorse. Death is his only way out of his dilemma; Uncle Oscar says at the end of the story, "My God, Hester, you're eighty-odd thousand to the good and a poor devil of a son to the bad. But, poor, devil, poor devil, he's best gone out of a life where he rides his rocking-horse to find a winner."
The story is couched in the symbols of the ancient myths. The mother is the poor, unsatisfied fairy princess who yearns for happiness; Paul is the gallant knight on horseback who rides to her rescue. But Paul's stallion, the traditional symbol of the self, or potency or masculinity, is only a wooden rocking horse. As such it denotes Paul's impotency, his pre-pubertal innocence, his unrealized manhood. He consequently has no self—the horse is both wooden and anonymous—because he has not emerged as a man. What prevents him from this emergence before death is the insatiable needs of the unsatisfied woman-mother. Although Hester, the mother, disguises her feminine needs of self-realization and fulfillment (in the largest sense of the meaning of sexuality), and although Paul responds directly to the disguise, he is indirectly and unconsciously responding to her indirect and unconscious needs. For him as a self-less and unrealized man-boy, the task he sets for himself is impossible. He dies as a result of his quest; it is the relentlessly unsatisfied woman-mother which kills him. The ancient myth of the man-devouring woman is recreated in modern terms.
The mythical aspect of the story is evident in the style and the symbols. The opening lines, "There was a woman who was beautiful, who started with all the advantages, yet she had no luck," contains both the ancient and the modern. The first seven words have a fable-like quality reminiscent of any number of fairy princess tales, yet the word advantages locates us in the atmosphere of the modern world; so does the word luck. The same juxtaposition of the mythical and the modern continues through the story; the same combination of the anonymous and the personal is repeated. Passages like the following demonstrate this juxtaposition of myth and modernity:
There were a boy and two little girls. They lived in a pleasant house, with a garden, and they had discreet servants and felt themselves superior to any one in the neighborhood. Although they lived in style, they felt always an anxiety in the house.… The child had never been to a race-meeting before, and his eyes were blue fire. He pursed his mouth tight, and watched. A Frenchman just in front had put his money on Lancelot. Wild with excitement, he flayed his arms up and down, yelling "Lancelot! Lancelot!" in his French accent.
The father in the story has no identity; he goes "into town to some office" and his "prospects never materialized." The central conflict is between the mother and the son, not between the man and his wife, even though the husband-man is responsible for the mother's plight. Where the man-husband fails, the son-boy tries to compensate; because it is the nature of the mother's needs that the boy cannot satisfy them, the boy is doomed from the beginning. The bizarre scene in which the bedeviled boy rides himself to death dramatizes Lawrence's idea that modern man is terrorized and finally engulfed by his incapacities to overcome his oedipal confrontation with the devouring woman-mother.
Source: Donald Junkins, "'The Rocking-Horse Winner': A Modern Myth," in Studies in Short Fiction, Vol. II,
No. 1, Fall, 1964, pp. 87-9. Junkins is an American poet, educator, and critic.

· Then: The financial circumstances experienced by the family in "The Rocking-Horse Winner" are shared by many upper-class people in the years surrounding World War I. Great emphasis is placed on possessions and the appearance of wealth among the privileged, particularly in London.
Now: In 1996, Princess Diana officially divorces Prince Charles, receiving an estimated $26 million dollars to insure that her lifestyle remains secure.
· Then: The English family undergoes a transformation with married couples having fewer children than previous generations. Of couples married in 1925, 16 percent have no children, 25 percent have one child, 25 percent have two, and only 14 percent have three or more children.
Now: From 1970-1995, the average number of children per family worldwide falls from six to three. The average size of a family in a developing country is 3.9.

· Then: By 1928 in England, all women eighteen years or older can vote. Increasing numbers of women begin to seek out intellectual and economic opportunities for themselves.
Now: Opportunities for women are largely equal to those for men. In 1990, Margaret Thatcher steps down after 11 years as Great Britain's prime minister.

Topics for Further Study
· Although the children's father is mentioned in "The Rocking-Horse Winner," he never actually appears. Why do you think the mother's brother, Uncle Oscar, has a larger role to play in this story?
What do you think Lawrence was trying to say about the role of men in the raising of their sons?
· How does "The Rocking-Horse Winner" portray the desire for material wealth?
· What were women's career options during the 1920s? How might this reality figure into the mother's lack of love for children? Explain your answer.

Media Adaptations
· The Rocking-Horse Winner was filmed in 1950 by Two Cities Films and stars John Mills and Valerie Hobson. The adaptation was written and directed by Anthony Pelessier.
· The Rocking-Horse Winner was filmed in 1977 starring Kenneth More, directed by Peter Medak, adapted by Julian Bond, distributed by Learning Corp.
· The Collected Short Stories of D. H. Lawrence (1974) is the complete collection of Lawrence's short stories.
· Lorenzo in Taos (1932), by Mabel Dodge Luhan, describes the time that Lawrence spent in Taos, New Mexico.
· "King of the Bingo Game," by Ralph Ellison, is a story that explores the role of fate in a black man's life at a moment he is in particular need of money to save his dying wife.
· "Araby," by James Joyce, a contemporary of Lawrence, is a story about a boy's epiphany regarding his schoolboy crush on a playmate's sister.
Bibliography and Further Reading
Sources

Harris, Janice Hubbard. The Short Fiction of D. H. Lawrence. Rutgers University Press, 1984, pp. 1-11,
224-27.

Snodgrass, W. D. "A Rocking-Horse: The Symbol, The Patterns, The Way to Live." In D. H. Lawrence: A
Collection of Critical Essays, edited by Mark Spilka. G. K. Hall, 1990, pp. 117-27.

Further Reading

Blanchard, Lydia. "D. H. Lawrence." In Magill's Critical Survey of Short Fiction, edited by Frank N. Magill.
Salem Press, 1981, pp. 1788-94. Provides an analysis of Lawrence's short stories.

Spilka, Mark. An introduction to D. H. Lawrence: A Collection of Critical Essays. Prentice-Hall, 1963, pp.
1-14. Spilka gives an overview of Lawrence's career and works.

The Rocking-Horse Winner: Topics for Further Study 

quinta-feira, 7 de abril de 2011

Class notes fro Death in the Woods - if you missed class, check this:

Sherwood Anderson, (1876-1941)  novelist, regional writer - Winesburg, Ohio chronicles changes in the Midwest at the turn of the century as a result of industrialization – first American example of modernism- not a novel and not a short story – a story cycle – a young man growing up in a small town and he thinks the place is limiting and leaves it- a community story) and excels in the short story.
Winesburg, Ohio & Death in the Woods - a collection of stories, not isolated, they form a cycle =  collections of stories with common themes, imagery, tone, setting and characters; other short story  cycle = Homer's Odyssey ; Chaucer's Canterbury Tales;  Joyce's Dubliners (theme of the ordinary turned exceptional). Anderson encouraged Faulkner to move back to his hometown & that changed lit. Ernest Hemingway, F. Scott Fitzgerald, and William Faulkner John Steinbeck, John Updike influenced by Anderson
Cycle: stories linked to one another & the reading of one modifies the others & there is a unity, a structure underlying them; the similarity and compelmentarity in theme, setting,
"Death in the Woods" – characteristics:
1)    direct authorial address to the reader;
2)   a circular, not linear, narrative structure;
3)   plot subordinated to characterization;
4)    simple style and vocabulary;
5)   and images drawn from elemental aspects of nature.
loneliness, fragmentation, and the search for beauty and wholeness.
importance of the narrator - the tradition of oral story-tellers. the central character is not Ma Grimes but the mature narrator who looks back on earlier experiences: the sight of an old, oppressed woman trudging from her farm into town in order to obtain the necessary food for her men and animals; the time he worked for a German farmer who hired a "bound girl"; the moonlit winter night he saw half-wild dogs almost revert to wolves in the presence of the near-death of a human.
the role of the mature narrator - struggles to weld his diverse experiences and images into a whole that will bring order out of their diffuseness and beauty out of their ugliness.
Ma Grimes "fed animal life." But also Ma Grimes fed was the creative life of the narrator: the story demonstrates, as Anderson explains in its final sentence, "why I have been impelled to try to tell the simple story over again." The reader feels, as the story comes to a close, that now, after perhaps ten or twelve years, Anderson has been able to create a beautifully unified work of art.
Note in "Death in the Woods":
(a) The various levels of the story: story of Ma Grimes, her relationship to the men and animals in the story, her role as "feeder" of life.
(b) The function played by the dogs, both literal and symbolic.
(c) Growth of the narrator from a young boy to a mature artist.
(d) The difficulty the narrator has in telling the story.
(e) The many images in the story, both from nature and from art.
Death in the Woods: Summary

The narrator of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ introduces the central character of the story: an anonymous old
woman who periodically comes to town to sell a few eggs and buy a few supplies. The woman is known only
by her last name, Grimes.

The story is the narrator’s fictionalized account of her life and death, focusing on one fateful trip into town.

The narrator recounts what he knows of Mrs. Grimes’s background, things that ‘‘must have stuck in my
mind from small-town tales when I was a boy.’’ The old woman’s husband, Jake Grimes, was a known
horse thief. He came from a family that had once been prosperous, but Jake and his father had squandered
their money.

Jake met his wife when she was a young ‘‘bound girl,’’ an orphan working for a German farmer in
exchange for her room and board. There were rumors that the farmer sexually harassed and perhaps even
raped the girl. Jake came to work for the farmer and began to take the girl out. The farmer caught them, and
he and Jake fought. The girl confided in Jake about the farmer’s abuse.

Jake married the girl out of defiance toward the farmer. They had a son and a daughter, but only the son
survived. She settled into a life of caring for the animals on their impoverished farmstead and making sure
there was food for her husband and son.

Jake’s threshing business failed because of his dishonest reputation, so he resorted to cutting firewood at a
small profit. Jake and his son went on trips and got drunk together while the woman tried to manage the small
farm. She no longer was intimate with her husband or even spoke to him. Not yet forty years of age, she had
begun to look old.

One winter day, Mrs. Grimes went into town with a few eggs to trade in exchange for some supplies. She
went to the butcher to beg for some meat scraps for the family dogs that accompanied her. The butcher was
kind to her and expressed anger at her husband and son for letting her go out on such a cold and snowy day. It
was the first time anyone had spoken to her warmly in a long time.

The woman set out for home with the heavy grain bag of food on her back. She decided to take a shortcut
through some woods in the hope of getting home before dark. Part of the way through, she stopped to rest in a
small clearing and fell asleep under a tree. She would never wake up from that sleep.

The four dogs that accompanied the old woman were used to foraging for food, so they killed a few rabbits
while she slept. Excited, they began to play and circle the woman, beating a track in the snow around her in a
‘‘kind of death ceremony.’’ One at a time they came up to the woman and stuck their noses into her face,

Death in the Woods: Sherwood Anderson Biography


waiting for her to die.

When she eventually died there in her sleep, the dogs dragged the woman out of the clearing by the grain bag
tied to her back—tearing her dress but leaving her body intact—and took the food out of the bag.

The narrator recounts hearing that a local hunter had found a dead body in the woods. The narrator and his
brother accompany the town marshal and a party of men as they go out and investigate. They know that they
will be late for supper but choose to go because ‘‘we would have something to tell.’’ The hunter reports
that the body belonged to a beautiful young girl.

When they get there they view the body—the first naked woman the narrator has ever seen. Frozen in the
snow, the old woman looks young and lovely. The boys return home, and the narrator’s brother tells the
dramatic story of the body in the woods. The narrator isn’t satisfied with his brother’s account, but says
nothing.

Mrs. Grimes’s body is not identified until the next day. The narrator hears fragments of her life story around
town. He says that the story was something he had to pick up slowly over time, ‘‘like music heard from far
off.’’ Years later he remembers and recounts the story of her death.

Death in the Woods: Characters

The Butcher

The butcher is the last person to talk to Mrs. Grimes before she dies. Taking pity on her, he gives her a
generous portion of meat that makes her pack too heavy and causes her to stop and rest in the cold.

The German Farmer

The German farmer once hired Mrs. Grimes as a ‘‘bound girl,’’ which meant that she lived on his farm,
cooked for him, and fed his animals. She suffered from his unwanted sexual advances until she married Jack
Grimes.

Jake Grimes

Jake Grimes is married to Mrs. Grimes. He is a profligate, a drunk, and a known horse thief. Jake counts on
his wife to make ends meet at their small farm, and does not contribute to the family economy. He expects her
to provide for him and treats her with indifference or cruelty; the marriage is a loveless one. After Mrs.
Grimes dies, the townspeople suspect Jake and his son of wrongdoing. Though they have alibis, they are
banished from the town.

Mrs. Grimes

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ chronicles the story of a woman, known as Mrs. Grimes, who lives on the outskirts
of town. The narrator recounts her sad history as a ‘‘bound girl’’ and an abused wife as a background to the
story’s central drama—the events surrounding her freezing to death in the woods and the ensuing discovery of
her body.

The old woman is the story’s central character, but she remains an enigma because her life experiences are
filtered through the narrator’s consciousness; therefore we know that the narrator has filled in the gaps with
experiences from his own life.

Anderson is known for creating characters based on the concept of the ‘‘grotesque.’’ While the word
grotesque—meaning something that is outlandishly or incongruously distorted—normally has a negative
connotation, Anderson viewed such distortion or imbalance sympathetically, as part of the human condition.

Death in the Woods: Summary


In some ways, the old woman is a grotesque. Her life—as the narrator views it—revolves around the feeding of
animal life. With other people, she is uncommunicative and isolated. However, in her death she becomes a
mythic figure that represents womanhood.

The Hunter

The hunter discovers the old woman’s dead body in the woods. He reports that the body belonged to a
‘‘beautiful young girl.’’

The Marshal

The marshal leads a party of men to the site in the woods where the hunter found the body. He questions the
hunter and initially suspects murder.

The Narrator

The narrator is a boy growing up in the town near where Mrs. Grimes lived. He did not know her personally
but reports the facts of her life and death. He passes along information that he has heard, as well as recounting
a few experiences as a direct observer—most notably, the discovery of the woman’s body in the woods.

Viewing the body has a strong impact on him: it is the first naked woman’s body that he has ever seen and
he, like the others, perceives her as beautiful and young. When he and his brother return home that night, it is
his brother who reports what happened.

The narrator is dissatisfied with his brother’s rendering of the story, and this is his motivation for retelling the
story in its current form years later, when he is an adult. The narrator admits that he added details from his
own experience until Mrs. Grimes’s story becomes something ‘‘complete’’ and thus beautiful.

The Narrator’s Brother

The narrator’s brother is delivering papers when word reaches town about a woman’s body found in the
woods. He joins the party rather than finishing his task and knows that this will make him late for supper.
When the narrator and his brother return home, it is the brother who recounts the remarkable events.

Old Woman

See Mrs. Grimes

Old Woman’s Son

The old woman’s son is nameless throughout the story. Like his father, he gets drunk and treats the old
woman like a servant. The son has a sexual relationship with a ‘‘rough’’ woman that he conducts under his
mother’s nose. She is not particularly offended, having ‘‘got past being shocked early in life.’’

Death in the Woods: Themes

Human vs. Animal

The main theme of the story, as described by the narrator, concerns Mrs. Grimes’s aim to ‘‘feed animal
life’’—including both humans and animals. She spends her life trying to sustain other life forms.

In other words, she feeds the German farmer and his wife, her husband and son, and the animals on their farm,
making no particular distinction between them. The men in her life are crude, selfabsorbed, abusive, not
significantly different from animals.

Mrs. Grimes is an outsider in the town; therefore it seems natural that she dies in the woods, surrounded by
dogs. In turn, the dogs are endowed with civilized, almost human qualities. Anderson even assigns dialogue to

Death in the Woods: Characters


them: ‘‘Now we are no longer wolves. We are dogs, the servants of men. Keep alive, man! When man dies
we become wolves again.’’ Moreover, the dogs do not eat the woman’s body when she dies, which
preserves the human/ animal distinction.

In life, the woman goes unnoticed by the townspeople. In death, she becomes an object of fascination for the
narrator as he grows up and remembers and reconstructs her story. The events of her simple life take on
mystery and beauty as the narrator crafts them into art, a high expression of humanity.

Sex Roles

The old woman’s role as a provider of food is closely tied to her gender role. Feeding is conventionally seen
as woman’s work. There is no emotional, nurturing quality to her constant feeding of others; in fact, she
views this role as a duty and a burden.

Nevertheless, the fact that she provides sustenance is closely associated with femininity and women’s
biological role in gestating and nursing babies. Some critics have interpreted the woman as an ‘‘earth
mother,’’ representing the sustenance offered by a feminized nature. However, this is a dark portrait of
Mother Nature as a powerless, passive woman forced to endure the abuse of men.

The theme of woman’s role as a provider of food is echoed by her role as an object of sexual desire. Feeding
even becomes a metaphor for sex: ‘‘Thank heaven, she did not have to feed her husband— in a certain way.
That hadn’t lasted long after their marriage and after the babies came.’’ Sex is another form of providing for
the physical needs of the men around her. The woman’s sexuality is prematurely depleted, as her hard life
and loveless marriage render her old before her time.

In death it is restored. Her slight, frozen body looks young again, and both the hunter and the narrator see her
as a beautiful object of desire. In this sense, she can be understood as representing an idea or prototype of
Woman in all of the phases of her life cycle.

Since this was the first naked woman’s body that the narrator had ever seen, her representation of
womanhood is crucial to the development of his own adolescent sexuality. As Jon S. Lawry writes in PMLA,
viewing her body in the snow is, for the narrator, ‘‘no mere event, but rather definition for him of the
mystery and beauty of woman.’’

Truth and Fiction

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ is a story within a story that comments upon the creative process. The narrator
recounts Mrs. Grimes’s life; yet he also reflects on his status and qualifications as a narrator, telling, in effect,
the story of how he came to understand and relate the story in its present form.

The narrator is both a witness and participant in some of the events of the story—most notably, the discovery
of the body—but he makes it clear that the old woman’s tale is closer to fiction than truth. Most of the story he
has either heard secondhand or extrapolated from his own experiences. Interrupting his narration of the old
woman’s past, he interjects, ‘‘I wonder how I know all of this. It must have stuck in my mind from
small-town tales when I was a boy.’’

He initially claims that he has little knowledge of the woman, and he admits that details of the story were
‘‘picked up slowly, long afterwards,’’ from his own experiences. Yet as he relates the story years later, he
deems it ‘‘the real story‘‘—more complete and satisfying than the version his brother told on the night the
body was discovered. His story— crafted and fictionalized—transcends anecdote and becomes a thing of
beauty, mystery, and meaning.

Death in the Woods: Themes


Death in the Woods: Style

Point of View

Point of view is probably the most striking and significant stylistic feature of ‘‘Death in the Woods.’’ The
story is narrated in the first person by a man looking back on an event that happened in his hometown when
he was a youth.

At first his qualifications for telling the old woman’s story seem somewhat dubious. The narrator is limited in
his view of events—a fact that he frequently calls to his readers’ attention. To him, the old woman was
‘‘nothing special. She was one of the nameless ones that hardly anyone knows, but she got into my thoughts.
I have just suddenly now, after all these years, remembered her and what happened.’’ He initially describes
the old woman only as a type, not an individual, and admits that his sources of information are not particularly
reliable.

Much of the old woman’s past he recounts based on anecdotes and gossip and experiences of his own that he
later merges with her story. For example, he recalls seeing Jake Grimes at the local livery barn and quotes his
speech, only to admit, ‘‘He did not say anything, actually. ‘I’d like to bust one of you on the jaw,’ was
about what his eyes said. I remember how the look in his eyes made me shiver.’’

The narrator feels a need to understand the woman’s life and death. Eventually, he finds beauty in the
‘‘completion’’ he is finally able to bring to the story as a story, without regard to its factual accuracy. Just
as important as this thematic ‘‘completion’’ is the mystery and resonance the story gains through the
narrator’s own personal investment in its symbolic significance.

The narration of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ shows how a formative moment in the narrator’s personal
experience acquires meaning over time. Anderson’s subtle manipulation of point of view highlights the
fiction-making process and illustrates how an active imagination can create mystery and beauty.

Structure

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ does not just tell the old woman’s tale, but re-tells it. Thus its structure is based on
repetition, which may begin to explain why several critics have described the story as being similar in form to
a poem.

At the first telling of the story, the narrator’s brother gives an unsatisfactory version of the story while the
narrator remained silent. Thus the whole text can be understood as the narrator’s retelling of that initial,
formative, unprocessed experience that he could not articulate. ‘‘The whole thing, the story of the old
woman’s death, was to me as I grew older like music heard from far off. The notes had to be picked up
slowly one at a time. Something had to be understood,’’ reads the narrator’s famous reflection on the his
impulse to retell.

Lawry suggests that ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ is structured by ‘‘the narrator’s progress from recorder to
creator.’’ It opens with the narrator’s account of a certain type of old woman, describing trips into town and
characterizing her as ‘‘nothing special.’’ This is the first and most brief telling of the old woman’s tale,
from which little meaning is derived.

His authority to tell the story grows as he describes climactic scene of her death. ‘‘I knew about it all
afterward, when I grew to be a man, because once in the woods in Illinois, on another winter night, I saw a
pack of dogs act just like that.’’ As he adds scenes and parallels from his own life to Mrs. Grimes’s story he
becomes a creator of her story.

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Death in the Woods: Historical Context

Anderson’s Midwest

When Anderson wrote ‘‘Death in the Woods,’’ the modernist literary movement was raging; many
American writers took up explicitly modern themes— such as the disenfranchisement of the middle-class
during the Industrial Revolution and effect of technological change on human existence—to explore the
distinctive experiences, mores, and sensibilities of the early twentieth century.

Anderson is unique because his writing style is decidedly modern—his pared-down style is often compared to
that of modernist giants Gertrude Stein and Ernest Hemingway—but his subject matter is not. To the contrary,
Anderson’s stories appear to take place in something of a historical vacuum. While many modernists
gathered in and wrote about the world’s cosmopolitan cities—Paris, London, New York—Anderson wrote
about life in the American Midwest.

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ takes place in a Midwestern town, likely based on Anderson’s childhood home of
Clyde, Ohio. In the 1890s, Clyde was a town of a few thousand people on the brink of expansion and
modernization. It had its own respectable institutions and cultural events, but its streets weren’t paved and
had no electric streetlights. It was, in the words of biographer Kim Townsend, ‘‘still a frontier town.’’

Anderson recalled it as a warm and intimate community where people knew and looked after each other.
These qualities were becoming scarce by the time Anderson began to write about his Midwestern childhood,
and his representations are always tinged with nostalgia for a way of life on the verge of extinction.

Autobiographical Connections

A different version of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ appeared as part of Anderson’s autobiography, Tar: A
Midwest Childhood. Beside the story’s smalltown setting, there are other significant autobiographical
elements to the story.

In many of Anderson’s writings he expresses hostility toward his good-for-nothing father and sympathy for
his long-suffering mother. In ‘‘Death in the Woods,’’ the Grimes marriage can be seen as an exaggeration
of the dynamics between Anderson’s parents: Anderson’s father, Irwin, was unable to hold a steady job; he
drank too much; cheated on his wife; and would disappear for days on end. During these times, his mother
Emma kept the impoverished family warm and fed. ‘‘Emma was continually providing,’’ Townsend writes.
She died of tuberculosis when Anderson was eighteen.

Another parallel between the woman in ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ and Emma Anderson is Anderson’s
description of his mother as having been a ‘‘bound girl,’’ rejected by her own mother and sent to work to
support herself until adulthood. His account of his mother’s youth (which may not be factually accurate) has
striking similarities to the history of the woman in the story.

‘‘Our mother had been so bound out, to some farming family somewhere in the southern part of the state of
Ohio, and my father, no doubt then a young dandy, had found her there and married her,’’ Anderson writes
in his Memoirs.

He describes his mother’s life:

She must have worked, all her life, even from childhood, for others, a childhood and young
girlhood of washing dishes, swilling cows, of waiting at table, a kind of half-servant in a
house of strangers to her own blood, only after marriage and children to become a wash
woman.

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Townsend considers Anderson’s lifelong interest in working women and his attitude toward women in
general as a direct result of his unresolved feelings toward his mother. ‘‘He would always think of her as
Woman, a figure who inspired him to do good, to write,’’ Townsend writes. ‘‘If he could not approach her
when she was alive, he would approach her through his works.’’

Death in the Woods: Critical Overview

A prolific writer, Anderson published eight novels, four collections of short stories, autobiographical works,
poems, plays, and essays. Critics agree that his reputation rests on his influential short fiction, although his
stories seem to range greatly in quality.

Anderson published his most important and influential work, Winesburg, Ohio, when he was forty-three years
of age. By 1926, after two novels were panned by the critics, his critical reputation suffered. Although
Anderson’s style is modernist, his themes and subject matter are not, which led him to be considered as
old-fashioned or irrelevant before his time.

Soon after Anderson’s death, there was a renewed critical interest in his work. In the 1940s several
anthologies of his fiction appeared and the first two biographies of Anderson were published. In his critical
study Sherwood Anderson, Rex Burbank asserted, ‘‘No other writer has portrayed so movingly the emerging
consciousness of the culturally underprivileged Midwesterner with neither condescension nor satiric
caricature.’’

The fact that Anderson’s reputation was in decline may have influenced the early reviews of 1933’s Death in
the Woods and Other Stories. Reviewers of the book were tepid in their praise. ‘‘This collection of short
stories neither augment nor diminish the affection with which America regards Sherwood Anderson,’’
maintained T. S. Matthews of the New Republic.

Matthews continued: ‘‘The almost childish unevenness of his performance, shown in most of his earlier
books, is echoed in Death in the Woods; but as almost always there are compensating high spots.’’

Many critics singled out the title story as one such ‘‘high spot.’’ As Louis Kronenberger contended: ‘‘In a
few of the short stories here there are a simplicity and tenderness, there are evocations of phrases and
moments in American life which, as things go, are the real thing.’’

In the opinion of Ray Lewis White, editor of The Achievement of Sherwood Anderson:

In only one case were critics of Anderson’s later work seriously wrong in their judgment.
Death in the Woods (1933), Anderson’s last collection of short stories, contains works that
are among our finest short fiction. . . . Perhaps because these were stories and not extended
writing, Anderson recaptured the tender charm of Winesburg, Ohio, The Triumph of the Egg,
and Horses and Men.

Other critics also consider this volume as one of Anderson’s best, and singled out ‘‘Death in the Woods’’
for special praise. Writing in the introduction to the Portable Sherwood Anderson, Horace Gregory described
the story as a ‘‘masterpiece’’:

Beyond any other story that Anderson wrote,’’ Gregory opines, [‘‘Death in the Woods’’]
‘‘was the summing up of a lifetime’s experience, and in its final version it became
Anderson’s last look backward into the Middle West of his childhood.’’

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Recent Anderson criticism has explored the themes and mechanics of the story, with special attention to the
narrator’s point of view. Writing in PMLA, Jon S. Lawry offered an extended interpretation of the narrator’s
complex relation to his subject:

The creative narrator is not, as is usually the case with narrators in Anderson’s stories,
involved with his subject through personal concerns, familial relation, or friendship. The
distance between them, however, serves to enhance their sympathetic contact; they have only
disinterested humanity in common.

David R. Mesher also focused on the underlying importance of the ‘‘narrator-turned-creator,’’ who openly
admits that he has ‘‘fabricated the most important elements of the story he is telling’’ and ‘‘projects the
reality of his own psychology onto the history of his subject.’’

Death in the Woods: Essays and Criticism

Commonality and Beauty in Death in the Woods

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ opens with a description of its central character, the old woman, as a familiar type
that anyone from a small town would recognize. She is a common and simple woman who lives on the
outskirts of town, coming there only occasionally to beg and barter for a few supplies.

The narrator initially characterizes Mrs. Grimes as ‘‘nothing special.’’ She is not known personally to
anyone in the community, and, being such a familiar figure, she is easy to ignore. ‘‘People drive right down
a road and never notice a woman like that.’’

Having emphasized her anonymity, the narrator then goes on to tell and retell her tale, which, by the end of
the story, has taken on mythic proportion. The imagined scene of her death is full of solemn mystery, and the
meaning of her life is revealed as transcendent.

In his introduction to The Portable Sherwood Anderson, Horace Gregory calls the story ‘‘universal,’’
praising Anderson’s skill in ‘‘giving the socalled common experiences of familiar, everyday life an aura of
internal meaning.’’ Through reconstructing her tale over time, the narrator transforms an old woman’s life
and death into a piece of art. In his work Anderson focused on the lives of simple and downtrodden people as
his subjects, often representing them as the embodiment of a kind of purity and integrity that he saw as
becoming increasingly rare in modern American life. He is praised by critics for a deceptively simple,
declarative writing style that had a great influence on Ernest Hemingway the modernist writer most famous
for simple, spare prose.

As opposed to his worldly contemporaries, who also wrote in this modern style, Anderson considered himself
provincial and unsophisticated. In his most famous book, Winesburg, Ohio, Anderson uses a youthful,
autobiographical narrator who denies his own artistry in statements such as, ‘‘It needs the poet here,’’
implying that his own descriptions are nothing special.

‘‘Death in the Woods’’ shares with Winesburg a plain-speaking narrative voice and descriptions that are
short, direct, and free of figurative language. However, in this story the narrator has become confident in his
storytelling capabilities— someone who knows what a powerful story is and how to tell it beautifully.

Like his narrator, Anderson came back to the story again and again over a period of many years. He first
drafted a version of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ on the back of the manuscript to Winesburg, Ohio, which was
published in 1919. He published signifi- cantly different versions of the story in A Story-Teller’s Story and

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Tar: A Midwest Childhood, where it was presented as a sketch and an autobiographical anecdote respectively.

Neither of these versions is equal the artistry of the final version. In the final version, which was published as
a short story in a volume of the same name, the mature narrator reflects on the artist’s role in giving form and
meaning to his commonplace subject matter.

So how does such a modest character as the old woman acquire such mythic stature? And how does a mere
anecdote come to be retold as something ‘‘complete,’’ with meaning that transcends its specific place and
time? One can fruitfully explore these questions by focusing on Anderson’s description of the recovery of the
old woman’s body from the woods clearing where she died. ‘‘The scene in the forest had become for me,
without my knowing it, the foundation for the real story I am now trying to tell,’’ the narrator says.

This scene is transformational to the narrator as a man, in terms of the development of his idea of
womanhood. It is also transformational to him as an artist, in terms of the development of his ideas of what
makes a powerful story. Both of these issues involve questions of aesthetics—that is, questions about what is
defined as beautiful. Thus there is an implicit parallel between the narrator’s struggle to understand female
and literary beauty.

Important to Anderson’s complex idea of womanhood is the issue of sexuality. Though it may be hard for
contemporary readers to believe, in his time Anderson was known for his shockingly direct discussions of sex.

In ‘‘Death in the Woods,’’ Anderson demystifies sexuality through his narrator’s descriptions of the
woman’s difficult life. He frankly describes how the woman, as a young ‘‘bound girl,’’ was nearly raped
by her employer. ‘‘He tore her dress down the front. The German, she said, might have got her that time if
he hadn’t heard his old woman drive in at the gate.’’ He is matter of fact about her son’s disrespectfully
flagrant affair with a ‘‘rough enough woman, a tough one.’’ Also he describes her relief at no longer having
to be intimate with her husband.

Here, sexuality is base and ugly. It is represented as nothing more than an inevitable part of the cycle of
‘‘animal life’’ in which the woman is trapped. Beauty, it would seem, has nothing to do with it.

Furthermore, the woman herself is characterized as so negligible that it is not even necessary to describe her
appearance or to say that she isn’t beautiful. From the start, she is described as old and, implicitly, sexually
irrelevant, despite the fact that she is barely middle-aged.

However, later in the story the woman undergoes a strange transformation that renders her young, beautiful,
and eerily alluring—she dies. The narrator and his brother join a party of men who go out into the woods
clearing where a hunter has discovered the body of an unidentified woman, which he describes as that of a
‘‘beautiful young girl.’’ When they arrive, they see her naked body and he, along with the others in the
party, also perceives her as beautiful. This is the first time he has ever seen a woman’s naked body.

In death, which usually corrupts the body, the woman is instead restored to youthful perfection— at least in the
collective imagination of the town’s men. ‘‘It may have been the snow, clinging to the frozen flesh, that
made it look so white and lovely, so like marble.’’

Whiteness is associated with purity, and marble suggests the idealized nudes of ancient sculpture. She has
become an aesthetic object, transformed by the projected ideas and desires of the community of men as much
as by the cold and snow.

The old woman is unknown when she trudges into town on her thankless chore, and she is equally unknown
when her youthful-looking body is reverentially carried back to town. Yet she has been completely

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transformed from a base and sexless beast of burden into a tragic and mysterious beauty. These are two
crucial and opposing ways that men see women that the narrator must try hard to piece together as he grows
into a man.

The woman’s transformation in turn transforms the young narrator. ‘‘She did not look old, lying there in
that light, frozen and still. One of the men turned her over in the snow and I saw everything.’’ In viewing
her, the narrator glimpses two of life’s darkest and most essential secrets—that of sexuality and that of death.

This startling vision has the quality of a revelation. He sees ‘‘everything’’—which makes sense both as a
boy’s embarrassed way of describing her nudity and as a statement about how the scene marked the end of
his childish innocence, forever altering his outlook on the world.

He goes on, ‘‘My body trembled with some strange mystical feeling and so did my brother’s. It might have
been the cold,’’ which has a similar effect of mixing literal-minded and transcendental interpretations of the
experience. Throughout the story, Anderson offers such a dual perspective— romanticizing his plain subject
matter and de-romanticizing it at once.

Like the woman, the narrator’s rendition of her story is transformed from something simple and crude into
something transcendent and beautiful. He recognizes right off that the experience has the makings of a good
story—‘‘something to tell. A boy did not get such a chance very often.’’

However, he also cannot tell it completely—in a way he considers authentic and therefore beautiful— until he
has matured. And this, like the woman’s transformation, is not a matter of uncovering objective truth, but of
seeing in the crude and commonplace glimpses of beauty.

The narrator needed to wait to tell her story in order to reconstruct it, ‘‘like music hear from far off,’’ from
a combination of observation, hearsay, and empathetic conjecture. In his viewing of her dead body and his
retelling of her story, the ‘‘real’’ beauty that is found is not objective, but created in the eye and
imagination of the beholder.

While Anderson has sometimes been denigrated as a ‘‘primitive’’ artist—vivid but naive in his
representations of simple subject matter—‘‘Death in the Woods’’ reveals his degree of self-consciousness
and artistic control. In this story, one of the strongest works of his later career, he can be seen as reflecting on
his artistic process.

Through his narrator—a mature man fictionalizing a formative experience from his youth— Anderson reveals
something about his own relationship to the simple people who populate his fiction. Amidst the crude and
commonplace Anderson perceives mystery, and uses his art to transform the life stories of those who are
‘‘nothing special’’ into things of beauty.

Source: Sarah Madsen Hardy, Short Stories for Students, Gale, 2000.

The Reader as Voyeur: Complicitous Transformations in
"Death in the Woods"

Like most writers Sherwood Anderson was vitally concerned with the workings of the imagination and the
creation of art. For Anderson, these concerns were also inextricably linked to questions of personal salvation.
In letters to his son John, himself a painter, Anderson asserted that ‘‘The object of art . . . is to save
yourself’’: ‘‘Self is the grand disease. It is what we are all trying to lose’’ (Letters). Given Anderson’s
faith in the redemptive possibilities of art, it is not surprising that the writer frequently compared ‘‘literary

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[and nonliterary] composition to the experience of pregnancy and deliverance, and also to the poles of
maleness and femaleness in life’’ (Letters). One letter composed three years before the author’s death well
illustrates Anderson’s understanding of the problematic nature of such ‘‘deliverance’’:

The trouble with the creative impulse . . . is that it tends to lift you up too high into a sort of
drunkenness and then drop you down too low. There is an artist lurking in every man. The
high spots for the creative man come too seldom. He is like a woman who has been put on her
back and made pregnant, but even after he gets the seed in him, he has to carry it a long time
before anything comes out. (Letters)

If, as Anderson claims, ‘‘There is an artist lurking in every man,’’ so, also, did the writer believe that there
is a woman ‘‘lurking’’ in every artist. Indeed, the image of the male artist whose ‘‘lurking’’ burden is the
female within is depicted repeatedly in the correspondence, perhaps nowhere more explicitly than in a letter
Anderson sent late in life to his mother-in-law, Laura Lou Copenhaver: ‘‘There is a woman hidden away in
every artist. Like the woman he becomes pregnant. He gives birth. When the children of his world are spoken
of rudely or, through stupidity, not understood, there is a hurt that anyone who has not been pregnant, who has
not given birth, will never understand’’ (Letters).

The assumptions ‘‘hidden away’’ within such assertions are easily gleaned from letters in which Anderson
frankly acknowledges his ‘‘old-fashioned’’ views about men and women. In another letter to his son John,
Anderson admitted, ‘‘I do not believe that, at bottom, they [women] have the least interest in art. What their
lover gives to work they cannot get’’ (Letters). As a result, the writer held that the sole ‘‘high spot’’
available for women to experience in life is childbirth. To be sure, Anderson understood that the biological
impulse also moves man, but, as he makes clear in letters to his male friends, the love of woman ‘‘isn’t
enough for an eager man’’: ‘‘No woman could ever be in herself what we want or think we want’’
(Letters). Thus, whereas woman’s destiny is circumscribed by biology, man’s destiny transcends the purely
physical and finds consummate expression only in the creation of art. As Anderson explained to Dwight
MacDonald in 1929:

There is no purpose other than the artist’s purpose and the purpose of the woman. The artist
purposes to bring to life, out of the . . . hidden form in lives, nature, things, the living form as
women purpose doing that out of their lovely bodies.

The artist there[fore] is your only true male. . . . (Letters)

The ‘‘tru[ly] male’’ quality of Anderson’s artistic imagination and of his polarized worldview is forcefully
represented in his short stories and novels, as well as in his letters and memoirs. Indeed, to speak of woman’s
destiny in the context of Anderson’s fiction is to call to mind what is undoubtedly one of the master
storyteller’s most disturbing tales, ‘‘Death in the Woods.’’ Written at the ‘‘peak of his [creative]
powers’’ (Howe), ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ has provoked a varied critical response, ranging from
interpretations that see the tale much as Anderson claims he did, as a biological allegory depicting woman as
feeder, to more recent interpretations that focus less upon the plight of the old farm woman and more upon the
narrative consciousness that constructs her story. This shift of focus has led several critics to conclude that
‘‘Death in the Woods’’ is ‘‘a story about the creation of a story’’ (Joselyn; see also Robinson), hence
Anderson’s many attempts to unveil the mechanics of the creative process through the workings of the tale’s
narrative center, an older man who looks back to one scene from his childhood out of which he will spin his
yarn. To borrow from the title Anderson gave to his first published memoir, ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ has
been increasingly viewed as ‘‘a story teller’s story.’’ As Wilfred Guerin argues, ‘‘It is a story about how
fragments become a whole and have meaning, partly through the workings of the unconscious, partly through
the conscious memory.’’

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That there exists an intricate bond connecting the ‘‘real story’’ (‘‘Death’’) of an old woman’s life and
death and the ‘‘creating’’ consciousness who narrates her tale has long been acknowledged. Critics have
also observed that the relationship between narrator and reader is similarly complex. As early as 1959, Jon
Lawry astutely perceived that the narrator’s tortuous labors to give meaning to the death he describes are
offered as both an interpretative and experiential model for the reader of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ to follow:
‘‘The audience is invited to enter as individuals into a process almost identical with that of the narrator. . . .
to share directly not only the narrator’s responses but his act of discovering and creating those responses.’’
What few critics have since examined, although both Lawry and William Scheick point toward the issue, are
the implicatory bonds that result when the reader blindly accepts this enticing invitation; for if the reader
succumbs to the narrator’s interpretative wiles, he becomes enmeshed in a web of guilt that connects him not
only with the ‘‘I’’/eye of the tale but also with the other men and boys in the woods who pruriently feed
upon the body of a dead woman. By further exploring the peculiar design of this web, I hope to illumine the
obsessive concern evidenced in this short story with the process of reading and making meaning. This is of
course the very experience that Anderson’s reader must also enact if the story is to be grasped, as the narrator
himself claims to have done, as an aesthetic whole: ‘‘A thing so complete has its own beauty.’’

Several critics have noted the somewhat unorthodox alternation of tenses that operates throughout ‘‘Death in
the Woods,’’ as in the first paragraph of the story: ‘‘She was an old woman and lived on a farm near the
town in which I lived. All country and small-town people have seen such old women, but no one knows much
about them. Such an old woman comes into town driving an old worn-out horse or she comes afoot carrying a
basket.’’ Although critics differ as to the effects of such shifts, many would agree with Guerin’s explanation
that ‘‘In this and in the second paragraph of the story the historical present tense of the verbs makes clear the
timeless quality of the regularity of such old women and their doings.’’ Diverting the reader’s attention from
the particular to the general, from the life of one old woman to the experience of ‘‘such old women,’’ the
narrator strives to ‘‘universalize’’ his story in a timeless setting by removing the ‘‘she’’ of his opening
description from history and by granting himself the authority to speak of ‘‘all country and small-town
people’’ in categorical terms. Such ahistorical maneuvering complements another effect of this passage that
no critic has yet observed: ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ begins much like a fairy tale. Further, any reader who
reflects upon the tales passed on in childhood may note a slight echo here with one of our culture’s most
famous allegories of female feeding, the Mother Goose story of the old woman who lived in a shoe. In
addition, the reader may come to see Anderson’s narrative as cautionary, particularly if other tales of wolves,
women, and dark woods come to mind. From this initial description then the reader comes to two important
realizations. First, the frame in which the ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ occurs is both fanciful and remote, a
timeless realm that suggestively resonates with the surreal landscape of children’s stories. Second, the reader
learns that the tale is not to be interpreted simply as the narrative of an isolated farm woman but rather as a
fiction that has universal implications. After all, one of the first statements the narrator makes about the old
woman is that she is ‘‘nothing special.’’

Having been thus directed toward the ostensible subject of the story, the reader soon finds that the
interpretative process is effectively impeded by obtrusive references the narrator makes concerning his own
past. Indeed, in the opening section of ‘‘Death in the Woods,’’ the reader learns almost as much about the
narrator’s childhood as about the plight of old country women. Interestingly, the narrator’s allusions to his
past closely resemble the boyhood recollections set forth in Anderson’s memoirs; yet, despite the similarities
that seem to link the storyteller with his tale, Anderson himself ‘‘persistent[ ly]’’ interpreted the narrative
of Mrs. Jake Grimes in thematic, not autobiographical, terms:

In a note for an anthology Anderson wrote that ‘‘the theme of the story is the persistent
animal hunger of man. There are these women who spend their whole lives, rather dumbly,
feeding this hunger. . . . [The story’s aim] is to retain the sense of mystery in life while
showing at the same time, at what cost our ordinary animal hungers are sometimes fed.’’
(Howe)

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Anderson’s reading is a superb illustration of what John Berger calls critical mystification—‘‘the process of
explaining away what might otherwise be evident’’—for as Irving Howe noted more than thirty years ago,
this interpretation is ‘‘apt, though limited. . . . Anderson could hardly have failed to notice that the story may
be read as an oblique rendering of what he believed to be the central facts about his mother’s life: a silent
drudgery in the service of men, an obliteration of self to feed their ‘persistent animal hunger,’ and then
death.’’ Regardless of the limits of Anderson’s analysis, one fact is clear: Anderson, like his narrator, is
trying to steer critics of ‘‘Death in the Woods’’ away from the realm of history—from the varying records of
a writer’s conflicted relationship with his mother—to the hallowed domain of myth. Having fastened upon a
presumably ‘‘safe’’ and unalterable interpreD tation of his story, Anderson thereby avoids public
confrontation with painful memories of his childhood.

How painful those memories were is suggested in several of Anderson’s more revealing letters. Of these,
perhaps none more poignantly illustrates the writer’s anguished ties to his past than one addressed but never
mailed to Paul Rosenfeld. Given the highly personal nature of its contents, it is easy to see why Anderson
chose not to post it; for far more than a simple communication to a friend, this lengthy letter represents an
aging artist’s ‘‘effort to justify’’ his politics and clarify his ‘‘obligation’’ as a writer (Letters). Of
primary importance to Anderson in 1936 was his relationship with the proletariat, a relationship that led the
writer to remember the tedious ‘‘hopelessness’’ of his mother’s struggles to support her family:

You must remember that I saw my own mother sicken and die from overwork. I have myself been through the
mill. I have worked month after month in factories, for long hours daily, have known the hopelessness of
trying to escape. I have seen my own mother stand all day over a washtub, washing the dirty linen of
pretentious middle-class women not fit to tie her shoelaces, this just to get her sons enough food to keep them
alive, and I presume I shall never in my life see a working woman without identifying her with my mother.
(Letters)

Several points immediately emerge from this passage. First, Anderson sees a significant portion of his own
adult experience as closely resembling his mother’s. As members of the working class, they have both
‘‘been through the mill.’’ Second, this excerpt obliquely suggests how much their lives diverged, for,
unlike his mother, Anderson ‘‘escaped’’ and rose out of his class to enjoy a successful career as a writer.
That he did so, he implies, is in some part a testament to his mother’s decision to sacrifice herself ‘‘just to
get her sons enough food to keep them alive.’’ Not surprisingly, a legacy of unresolved guilt still haunts the
writer. Anderson avoided his mother’s fate, it seems, precisely because he chose another course; for
Anderson, self came first. Indeed, the proliferation of I’s in this passage points toward the egocentric nature
of his interests. In short, Anderson as artist is evidently more enthralled by his own vision of martyred
motherhood than by the grim particulars of his mother’s impoverished existence, hence the heavy reliance
upon varying forms of the verb ‘‘to see’’ in the passage above: ‘‘I saw,’’ ‘‘I have seen,’’ ‘‘I shall
never . . . see.’’

This shift of focus away from the mother and toward the artist parallels the narrative stratagems employed in
the opening section of ‘‘Death in the Woods.’’ Here the narrator also moves quickly to guide the reader’s
attention away from his apparent subject, an old farm woman, to what is ultimately his larger
concern—himself. Particularly jarring is the narrator’s first substantial digression concerning the liver he was
forced to eat as a child, a digression that interrupts his account of what old women do when they come to
town:

Such an old woman . . . takes [eggs] to a grocer. There she trades them in. . . .

Afterwards she goes to the butcher’s and asks for some dog-meat. Formerly the butchers
gave liver to anyone who wanted to carry it away. In our family we were always having it.
Once one of my brothers got a whole cow’s liver at the slaughterhouse near the fair grounds

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in our town. We had it until we were sick of it. It never cost a cent. I have hated the thought
of it ever since.

Clearly, this is a narrator who needs close watch, for as such digressions multiply, the reader becomes
increasingly fascinated not with the ‘‘real story’’ of an old woman’s death but rather with the peculiar
manner in which her story is told. This first digression is peculiar enough, suggesting as it does a puerile
hostility on the narrator’s part toward his past as well as the bonds of poverty and sickness that bridge the
narrator’s memories of his childhood with the experience of ‘‘nameless’’ country women. At this juncture,
the narrator also reveals that when he first noticed the woman he soon identifies as Mrs. Jake Grimes, he
himself was literally sick in bed with ‘‘inflammatory rheumatism,’’ a statement that takes on added
significance when he subsequently remarks that Mrs. Grimes had journeyed to town even though ‘‘she
hadn’t been feeling very well for several days . . . .’’ Given the vehemence of these boyhood reflections, the
reader might justifi- ably wonder at this point if the ‘‘inflammatory’’ child has ever fully recovered, for as
the unpredictable narrator continues to weave his tale, the reader begins to sense that this man is still none too
well.

Following this unsettling digression, the narrator sketches the rough outlines of Mrs. Grimes’s life. Through
him we learn that in her youth she worked as a ‘‘bound girl’’ for a German farming couple: ‘‘At the
German’s place she . . . cooked the food for the German and his wife. . . . She fed them and fed the cows in
the barn, fed the pigs, the horses and the chickens. Every moment of everyday, as a young girl, was spent
feeding something.’’ That her life was neither one of ease nor happiness becomes plain when the narrator
discloses that the ‘‘young thing’’ was sexually abused, perhaps raped, by her employer. Interestingly,
however, the reader’s knowledge of the bound girl’s life is unstable, for the narrator evidences uncertainty
concerning the particulars of her story. Thus, in the opening section of ‘‘Death in the Woods,’’ the narrator
first hesitantly supposes that the young girl was ‘‘bound’’—‘‘You see, the farmer was up to something
with the girl— she was, I think, a bound girl . . .’’—whereas only shortly afterwards he claims that he knows
the woman was so: ‘‘I remember now that she was a bound girl and did not know where her father and
mother were.’’ Such wavering causes the reader to question the narrator’s confidence in the truth of the tale
he says he has only ‘‘suddenly’’ remembered: ‘‘I have just suddenly now, after all these years,
remembered her and what happened. It is a story.’’ By calling attention in this way to the manipulative
possibilities of narration, Anderson directs his audience to larger questions concerning the nature of
‘‘story’’ telling. As Mary Joselyn observes, ‘‘the fact that [Anderson] goes out of his way several times to
tell us that the story might have been told . . . differently is important, for these statements emphasize that the
process of creation is essentially one of choice and of selection.’’

The role that choice plays in the shaping of fiction is stressed on several occasions in ‘‘Death in the
Woods’’ when the narrator returns to scenes or conversations that he has previously described. In the
opening section of the story, the narrator records two conversations that take place between the bound girl and
Jake Grimes, another employee on the German couple’s farm. Although the conversations are not identical,
the subject of these talks is: both focus upon the sexual abuse that the young girl allegedly suffered on the
farm. The narrator first recounts that before Jake became the bound girl’s lover, she confided in him that
‘‘when the wife had to go off to town for supplies, the farmer got after her. She told young Jake that nothing
really ever happened, but he didn’t know whether to believe it or not.’’ Between this and a later dialogue
occurs a fight involving the German and his hired hand, which the narrator delightfully describes: ‘‘They
had it out all right! The German was a tough one. Maybe he didn’t care whether his wife knew or not.’’ In
the midst of this passage, the reader gradually realizes that the narrator could not possibly know all the details
he provides of the scene, for there were no witnesses to the brawl. Indeed, the narrator himself seems aware of
this problem when he parenthetically inserts: ‘‘(I wonder how I know all this. It must have stuck in my mind
from smalltown tales when I was a boy).’’ Following this admission, the reader learns of the conversation
that takes place after the fight when Jake finds his lover ‘‘huddled up . . . crying, [and] scared to death.’’
Now, however, the narrator’s phrasing suggests that the bound girl’s ‘‘stories’’ are not to be believed:

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‘‘She told Jake a lot of stuff, how the German had tried to get her, how he chased her once into the barn, how
another time . . . he tore her dress open clear down the front.’’ The narrator’s unwillingness to grant the
woman any degree of credibility in either of these confessions is further emphasized when he reveals that Jake
Grimes ‘‘got her pretty easy himself, the first time he was out with her,’’ an assertion that may once again
lead the reader to wonder how the narrator can possibly ‘‘know all this.’’

What Anderson himself knows of course is how to construct a story, a story that, as its narrative voice
becomes increasingly assured, causes the reader to question any interpretation offered concerning the meaning
of the life and death of Mrs. Jake Grimes. Indeed, as the description of the fight scene suggests, the narrator
identifies himself less with the plight of the ‘‘young thing’’ who is ‘‘scared to death’’ than with the men
who are able to bind such women to their will. This is, moreover, not the only occasion in which the narrator
reveals his sympathy with brutal forms of masculine expression, as is evident in the second section of the
story when Mrs. Grimes makes her last trip to the butcher’s:

she went to the butcher and he gave her some liver and dog-meat.

It was the first time anyone had spoken to her in a friendly way for a long time. The butcher
was alone in his shop when she came in and was annoyed by the thought of such a
sick-looking old woman out on such a day. . . . [He] said something about her husband and
her son, swore at them, and the old woman stared at him, a look of mild surprise in her eyes
as he talked. He said that if either the husband or the son were going to get any of the liver or
the heavy bones with scraps of meat hanging to them that he had put into the grain bag, he’d
seen him [ sic ] starve first.

In spite of the narrator’s tacit assumption that his audience will see this interchange as positive, many readers
imagining this encounter might question how ‘‘friendly’’ such a conversation would appear to a woman
grown accustomed to ‘‘the habit of silence’’ who suddenly finds her family being sworn at and threatened
by a man she hardly knows.

Immediately following this passage, the narrator depicts the death that has been anticipated since the opening
lines of the story. In this middle section of the narrative, the old woman starts her journey home. Laden with a
sack of provisions too heavy for her, Mrs. Grimes decides to take ‘‘a short cut over a hill and through the
woods. . . . She was afraid she couldn’t make it’’ otherwise. In the midst of her ‘‘struggle’’ home, the old
woman ‘‘foolish[ly]’’ allows herself to rest against a tree and ‘‘quietly’’ falls into a sleep from which she
never completely awakes. The interest in the ‘‘strange picture’’ her death presents lies with the several dogs
that are ‘‘running in circles. . . . round and round’’ her sleeping form: ‘‘In the clearing, under the
snow-laden tree and under the wintry moon they made a strange picture, running thus silently in a circle their
running had beaten in the soft snow.’’ At this point, the narrator shocks the reader by disclosing that he also
has been part of a similarly ‘‘strange picture’’: ‘‘I knew all about it afterward, when I grew to be a man,
because once in the woods in Illinois, on another winter night, I saw a pack of dogs act just like that. The dogs
were waiting for me to die as they had waited for the old woman that night when I was a child . . . .’’ Like
most critics, Jon Lawry dismisses this revelation as fictive, suggesting that Anderson is striving to unveil the
‘‘negative capability’’ necessary to the artist. According to Lawry, even the narrator knows that at this
moment he is telling tales. Evidence in the memoirs, however, suggests that the adventure in the Illinois
forests may be interpreted less figuratively; for the experience the narrator records seems modeled on a
‘‘strange performance’’ Anderson himself claims to have witnessed when, as a young man, he awoke to
find himself encircled by a pack of dogs:

In the forest on the winter night dogs kept leaving the mysterious circle in which they ran and
coming to me. Other dogs ran up the log to put their forelegs on my chest and stare into my
face. It seemed to me, that night, that they were caught by something. They had become a

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wolf pack. . . .

That there was such a thing as man, that they were the servants of man, that they were really
dogs not wolves in a primitive world. That night I stood the strange performance as long as I
could and then I arose and ran. . . . I shouted. I . . . picked up a s